Wednesday 18th march 2015
The clouds of pollution drift in front of the sun,blocking its rays. They called it the dark city it was given that name because of the things that happen there. In the water big factories were dug deep into the ground.outside the front of the main building sort of like the parliament of dark city,a small
army of heavily armed guards patrolling back and forth the front of the palace.

March 18, 2015 at 9:26 pm
This is a very evocative piece of writing, Nefer-ra. Have a look back at it to see if you can identify the sentence break that you’ve missed!